This One's Free
I have written a short story I wish to share with y'all, in the hopes that you will become addicted and need more. Here is the link:
five to three
Enjoy!
As always, feedback of any sort is appreciated -- even of the anonymous kind.
five to three
Enjoy!
As always, feedback of any sort is appreciated -- even of the anonymous kind.
10 Comments:
At 6:37 PM, NakedHobo said…
Nanook of the North? Miss B? Hmm, sounds a little familiar to me.
At 8:45 PM, Michael and Tessa said…
I liked it Mike. The deviousness in your story was marvelous, almost as if you personally had done it. But I know you, and I doubt you would do something like that.
At 9:43 PM, Anonymous said…
The staring chicks freaked me out.
FREAKED.
At 6:17 AM, Mike Pape said…
Bif, you forgot about Mr. Paulsen. That's even more obvious. "Write what you know" is what I've always been told.
Michael, it was just a little devious. That's ok, right?
Anonymous, I'm very glad about that.
Everyone, sorry for misspelling freshmen (I somehow thought -man was the adjectival form) and lazer (thinking of "Lazer 103"), and for a couple punctuation errors. Maybe I should let my editor read my stuff before I post it.
At 8:15 AM, drew said…
michael: because i can't help myself, i read your story and made some line-by-line edits ( i do not mean to steal your editor's job) as well as some overall comments. unfortunately, i don't know what your primary email address is. could you post it here or email it to me? (your editor has my email address.)
At 9:10 AM, Mike Pape said…
Everyone,
my email is: epthnation@yahoo.com
At 11:58 AM, NakedHobo said…
I didn't forget. CBD! CBD! CBD!
At 11:45 PM, Anonymous said…
Loved it!! It was as if I was in high school again. "Better never than late!!"
At 7:27 AM, jill said…
Ha. Michael's told me that one.
At 4:54 AM, Michael and Tessa said…
Devious is always good, no matter how much.
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